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Mighty Morphin Prayer Warrior

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Blur


(still under construction)


Blur...by me

trailing embraces echoing away
disregarded faces
as the hour glass erases;
just a blur awakening within
wrapped across time
left in the past like fragrant kisses
prevailing love, untreasured love,
unfathomed thoughts easily forgotten
a blur within a blur
so many lives,
so many men.
unexisting emotion
waning in slow motion
I don't remember you
disguised anonymousity
desiring curiosity
leaving me behind and
waiting for the next.
I can see him coming,
and only moments later
even after he see's me,
I will be a blur within a blur.

(where do I post poem?  Here?)



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Lamentation 3:24 The Lord is all I have, and so in him I put my hope.


He gathers the lambs in his arms and carries them close to his heart. Isaiah 40:11

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This is the right place to post your poems.  This one is beautiful, but way over my head!!

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Bravo! I really could feel the emotion in this...I mean it.

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